Wednesday, 25 June 2014

SCI SPANKS 2014 - My Story



SCI SPANKS 2014


Sci Spanks 2014 is finally here! Please visit Governing Ana for the prize list, sign-up sheet, and free books. 

You can win from a prize pool valued at over $1,000, including a Kindle Fire or Nook HD donated by Blushing Books!

Many authors will also offer a contest on their individual blogs.  Your comment on their blogs automatically enters you in both the main contest and the individual contests!

How do you play?

1.Visit each blog between Wednesday, June 25th and Sunday, June 29th to read the posted stories and excerpts.

Note: Natasha Knight’s story takes place in a nonconsensual setting, meaning the heroine has not consented to getting spanked. If you are offended or alarmed, you may prefer not to read her story.


2. Leave a comment answering the story question on each blog.  You will receive one entry per blog for the grand prize drawing.  You will also be automatically entered in that author’s individual contest, if she has one.

3.If you have visited all of the blogs, visit Ana’s blog to sign up for FIVE bonus entries to the grand prize.

4.Deadline is midnight EST (UTC -5) on June 29!!

5. If you successfully completed a previous challenge (Love Spanks 2014, Spank or Treat 2013, Spankee Doodle 2013, Love Spanks 2013, or Spank or Treat 2012), you may add “VIP” to your comments.  You will earn THREE bonus entries toward the grand prize.  (Yes, we will be doing this again.  Yes, if you successfully complete the Love Spanks 2014 challenge you can become a VIP for our next activity!)

6. If you are a writer of fiction (any kind), add “W” to your comments to be entered in the special author prize drawings.

7. If you are Sci Spanks 2014 Ambassador, please add “Amb” to your comments to receive your extra prize drawing.

8.Visit Governing Ana or any of the participating blogs on Wednesday, July 2nd to find out the lucky winners. Will it be you? We will also announce prizes on the Sci Spanks Facebook page.

Like these events? Want to support your favorite scifi authors? Become a Sci Spanks Ambassador! In exchange for promoting this event, you will receive one extra prize entry, AND you are still eligible to participate and win prizes! To find out the details, send an email to oliviastarke@ymail.com, with the subject line “Sci Spanks Ambassador.”

For more information, updates, and a list of participating authors, please visit Anastasia Vitsky’s blog.

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Join the exclusive chat with Sci Spanks authors! Message Anastasia Vitsky on Facebook or contact Anne Ferrer Odom to receive an invitation.

For more spanking fun, visit Saturday Spankings for additional snippets.



For my contribution to Ana’s event, I would like to offer a small taste from my Sci Fi novel, Heartsong, which is still being edited. 

Although the novel itself contains very little in the way of spanking, I thought it would be fun to imagine what would happen to my heroine if the man in her life finally decided that her annoying behaviour required some attention.

I hope you enjoy reading it, but if you don’t, just blame Anastasia for inviting me along.

Thanks, Ana, for giving me this opportunity, and for being a good friend.



Excerpt from Heartsong - Book One Eriduh

I’m married to an alien.

My husband, Breeheny, is a bona fide extraterrestrial. You can Google him if you don’t believe me.

Not only does he come with every spine-tingling attribute on a scale from 1 to 10, such as extraordinary height teamed with mouth-watering physical advantages, that cause my libido on occasion severe disbelief, but he is pretty hot in the looks department as well.

As if this isn’t enough to knock a girl sideways, he has a voice that sounds like rich melted chocolate, and the sort of strong determination that makes you realize he is a man used to taking charge and getting his own way at all times and under all circumstances.

Therein lies a problem.

Every upside has its downside. Every positive has its negative.

Every blatantly reckless and disobedient action on my part, has its consequence.

A consequence that often seems to result in the aforesaid alien’s left hand doing its utmost to turn the silky, pale and sensitive cheeks of my bottom into two swollen and scarlet globes you could quite adequately warm your hands on, on a cold winter’s day, or even fry an egg on if you happened to have lost your frying pan.

This means that as soon as my howls have died down to manageable decibels, and I have ceased my anguished bunny-hops whilst trying desperately to rub away some of the pain, I promise myself I will divorce him at the very earliest opportunity, and in between breathless sobs and hiccups I do my best to inform him of this intention. He, on the other hand, simply folds me in a quick hug, kisses the top of my head, and smirks.

He is the type of man who thinks nothing of laying down rules, stating that they must be obeyed, yet who frequently omits to inform me of (a) the reason for the rules, or (b) the consequences of ignoring them. If you have a man like mine, then you have my full sympathy.

Nothing annoys me more than a man like this. Especially as he is the type who never hesitates to warm my bottom using not only his hand, but an eighteen inch wooden ruler (yes, I know it is prehistoric, but believe me when I tell you it does the job) each and every time I am guilty of usurping his authority in the smallest of ways, such as going for an unauthorized stroll around his spaceship, keeping his crew from carrying out their duties, or attempting to borrow his flyer though I have been told categorically never to fly unaccompanied until he considers me to have gained experience.

Not surprisingly on one such recent and momentous occasion, and in order to rub salt into my wounds, perhaps to emphasize the fact that he has an entirely different take on the situation, he warned me that if he ever catches me joy-riding in his flyer again, he will ensure that my bottom remains hot and blazing for a week, not just a day or two.
 
Let me explain.

Breeheny has an obsession with my safety. I, on the other hand, find this irritating and inconvenient – I am a grown woman after all, and English.

Sadly it is my blatant disregard for both safety and rules that has resulted in what Breheny says is a written-off flyer, barely off the production line, with brightwork so glossy and new it looked as if it was still wet.

It is this disregard that has caused him to drop an entire container of freshly brewed latte and spit the remainder over half his Bridge and the officers on duty there, has led to a spanking of truly epic proportions, and causes me yet again to consider my propensity for divorce action.

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The day starts off normally enough.

The hairbrush comes down for what could possibly be the fifteenth time. Unfortunately I am bawling my eyes out and can’t count even if you beg me to.

“You have used a whole week’s supply of water in just ten minutes.”

Breheny’s voice sounds about as pained as my rapidly reddening rear.

“We’ve been over this again and again. Until we can be reliably assured of coming out of a wormhole in the vicinity of a hydrogen based planet, and therefore having access to fresh supplies, the rule is the same for you as for any other person aboard this ship. You conserve water.”

Swat Swat Swat

He increases his tempo.

“Why you have to be constantly reminded is a complete mystery to me.”

Swat Swat Swat

“When I come off the Bridge I expect to be able to have the same length of shower you have the privilege of taking.”

Swat Swat Swat

“I do not find it remotely funny to cover myself all over with this smelly, feminine, lavender, excuse for a cleansing bar you call soap, only to have the warning buzzer go and the water to cease running.”

Swat Swat Swat

“And all because you either couldn’t be bothered to wait for me to share a shower, or you decided to take a shower twice as long as anyone else.”

Swat Swat Swat

He throws down my hairbrush and sits me on his lap.  I wince and cry louder, trying to shrug off his arms as they persist in hugging me tight.

“So can I remind you once again of the rules and ask you to remember – only five minutes, in future.”

His head disappears in the direction of my bosoms. I feel myself pushed backwards on the bed and his hand starts to play melodies on my most sensitive bits.

I stop sniffling and moan instead. Did I happen to mention that Breeheny has a way of insisting on my obedience that mixes pain with pleasure in the most convincing way?

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Having been on the Bridge for most of the night, it isn’t long before he is snoring.

I am now wide awake, so I finish dressing and make my way to the Mess deck where I consume a glass of Spaartahn pear juice and a large deliciously spicy bread roll slathered with honey. I am due to meet Morgane, Breheny’s younger brother and second in command, for a flying lesson.
 
Although my flying career to date has been somewhat erratic, and the results of my endeavors unpredictable, I never miss an opportunity to take a flyer for a few turns around the immediate area of space occupied by the Isandia.

This time I am disappointed. Morgane is nowhere in sight. My spirits drop, but I look around, see Breeheny’s flyer primed and ready to go at a moment’s notice, and resolutely decide my first solo flight is imminent regardless of his stupid rules.

I clamber into the driving seat intent on fastening my helmet and ignoring the fact that the deck seems peculiarly quiet for this time of day.

I lower the canopy and rapidly run through the usual pre-flight checks. Everything seems in order. I fire her up, lift and make my escape via the force-field and the open doors. The stars appear like clotted cream across my vision as I turn slightly, veering down and under the belly of the huge vessel. I try to remember everything Morgane has told me.

Fortunately the flyer is no more difficult to handle than driving a Jaguar XK8 and I play happily like a child with a new toy, keeping well to the rear of the Isandia, though I know Breeheny is dead to the world, or rather, universe.

Eventually, feeling somewhat bored, I become more adventurous and turn away heading into, for me at least, unchartered territory.

Big mistake.

Massive.

I find myself caught up in a cloud of rolling space debris that ranges from rock the size of front doors, to pieces the size of whole houses, and one or two the size of sky scrapers.

Panic-stricken I complete a rapid U-turn whilst swerving madly in order to avoid a collision. The debris appears thicker than I think and I feel on the smug side when I finally manage to extricate myself, mostly in one piece, and come out a short distance from the ship. My smugness is wiped off my face, when I look up in horror, to see a line of grim-faced officers observing me through the viewing port on the Bridge.

Breeheny, who by this time has split his coffee, forces his way through them to stand glaring at me with a grim Just you wait until I get hold of you face. I try to turn and flee.

This time my luck runs out. I narrowly miss a piece of rock seemingly the size of Newfoundland, only to slam sideways into another piece the size of Canada. Well, okay, that’s an exaggeration, but it feels like I’ve hit an oncoming express train.

Dizzily I bounce around for a bit, sirens blaring as the automatic safety mask on my helmet glues itself to my face. The flyer spins and leaks oxygen like an old bucket, and I think I may throw up at any minute. Fortunately I pass out before the crew sent to extract the flyer and return it to the flight deck, arrive.

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How can a voice resembling chocolate develop a hard edge to it so quickly?

Four days have passed and I am sufficiently recovered from my little escapade to, in Breeheny’s words, suffer the consequences of my misdemeanors.

I am draped over his lap, my front half on the bed, chewing a pillow in order to try to muffle my howls, my back half feeling and possibly looking like a roast on a spit. He ignores the ruler and just uses his hand, but I fear that is about to change.

I am unceremoniously dumped on the floor still howling. Breeheny is undeterred. He heaps pillows on the end of the bed, then picks me up and arranges me over them, my glowing bottom uppermost. His arm feels like steel, as he holds me firm, my left hand trapped beneath me.

I notice a faint blur out of the corner of my eye, then the memory of all previous spankings dwindles rapidly into insignificance. I try to lift up but am securely held down. Breeheny swings a length of deep purple leather around a foot long and two and a half inches wide across my unhappy cheeks.

“This is P’tahrian F’leem leather. It’s what my father used to discipline Freer, Morgane and I when we were boys. I only recently came across it amongst my possessions. I must have kept it as a souvenir. I didn’t realize it would come in handy so soon, but I think you’ll agree it’s extremely effective.”

He moves to my sit spots.

I scream. He keeps going.

“It’s pointless having a discussion with someone who so consistently ignores what I say. Didn’t you think it strange the flight deck was so quiet? Why did you think I was able to leave the Bridge so early in order to take some down time?

“I had hoped to share that time with you.”

The purple strap moves down to scald the backs of my thighs. I kick and it curls itself around the inside of my right thigh.

I scream. He keeps going.

“Never again will you violate a rule and place yourself in danger. Do you understand?”

The strap continues to fall on its way back up, re-crossing the welts left when it passed that way before.

I scream. He keeps going.

I stop fighting and sag against the covers, my legs falling apart.

He lays one final crack across my bottom that falls across my lower lips, stinging like hornets. I am crying too hard to react.

He gathers me into his arms, my terrorized bottom resting on his knees, his hand in my hair.

“Eriduh, you are my heart” he tells me. “I cannot live without you.








111 comments:

  1. Ooh Ami...this is awesome! Looking forward to the rest of the story...I know it is going to be every bit as awesome! :D Thank you Ana for pushing a bit. ;)

    Hugs and Blessings...
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    1. Thanks, Cat, glad you enjoyed it. Believe me, this is just a very tiny snippet I tweaked a bit - and Ana is always pushing me, LOL.

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    2. My wooden spoon and I will get you in line!

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    3. What me? Butter wouldn't melt....

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  2. (w) Great excerpt; thank you for sharing it - certainty grabbed my attention (and my rear a little sore)

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    1. Glad I reached you rear end, and thanks for dropping by to comment.

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  3. Definitely a good premise! Can't wait to read the rest.

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    1. Thanks Melody, although this was taken from somewhere in the middle, and there is a whole lot still to edit.

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  4. *giggles* Swat them sit spots! I love it and I can't wait for it to be published so I can enjoy the rest of the story!!! Great job! Heather Fortman HAFortman@gmail.com "W"

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    1. Thanks very much for your kind comments, Heather. I just need to finish my editing and then find someone who is interested. LOL!

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  5. Great story, funny and sexy. Thanks!!

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    1. Hi Ameliah, thanks for dropping by and giving me a good comment.

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  6. Now this is truly a spanker! And I want my own hot alien now. oliviastarke@ymail.com

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    1. He certainly does know how to spank! LOL! Wait till she REALLY gets in trouble!

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  7. Now this is truly a spanker! And I want my own hot alien now. oliviastarke@ymail.com

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  8. I really liked this story and am looking forward to the rest. How can I get an alien like that. They are always so sexy. Thanks. rameyer.nmb@gmail.com

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    1. Yes, Breeheny is pretty sexy, but some of the other aliens in the book are the type you run from! LOL! Thank you.

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  9. I'm glad Ana invited you. This was terrific. Gotta love these hot, dominant, wonderful aliens. Thanks so much for participating. You fit in with all these other great authors. laurah2727@yahoo.com
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    1. Thank you, Laura, for your kind comments. Yes, he is a very dominant man but it was only when Ana twisted my arm and told me she expected me to submit a story that I realised he was a spanking expert. LOL!

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  10. Lol! I googled him :) This is a great story, perfect way for me to start the hop. Thanks Ami! Thecoverartisan@gmail.com amb

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    1. I am really glad I made the start of your blog hop a pleasant experience. Thank you.

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  11. Wow!! I loved the preview! Sounds like an amazing story!!

    Thank you so much for participating!
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    1. Thank you very much for your encouraging comments, Kristin. I have enjoyed participating.

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  12. Ami, fantastic story, though I really feel for your heroine. Breeheny is a strict task master, though she clearly hasn't learned her lesson when she disobeys him again within minutes of her last chastisement. I guess he needs to be strict to make a point. Loved the excerpt and look forward to reading the story when it is released.

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    1. Kathryn, I can tell you she leads him a dance - you don't know the half of it. What with her running circles around him, a second dominant hero competing for her affections, battles galore, and a menacing and bloodthirsty saurian race thrown in for good measure, it won't be an EASY dance either! Thank you for your kind comments.

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  13. That's some serious spanking. Like Kathryn, I felt for the heroine, but I also found myself totally irritated with her for overusing rationed water as if she were more deserving of it than the rest of the ship. Between that and the flyer, I kind of wanted to spank her myself... :)

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    1. I am very pleased you found her irritating, Anne. She certainly can be - irritating and annoying. Go ahead and spank her - you are welcome! Thank you for your comments.

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  14. Thanks for the preview. Good inclusion in the collection.
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    1. Thank you for your comments, Catrina.

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  15. Definitely agree she deserves it!

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    1. Yes, she does mostly. But you will need to read the whole thing. Thank you very much for stopping by.

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  16. To paraphrase the Bard - Methinks the lady doth protest too much. Since she obviously knows the rules and the consequences, but continues to break the rules anyway, maybe she enjoys being spanked more than she wants to admit. Even to herself.

    Good start, looking forward to the rest.

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    1. Ah - she doesn't seem to 'get it' re the rules, which is why she is ALWAYS in trouble. I have to admit to you that much of her character is based on mine! Sigh! As for enjoying being spanked - I admit to that as well! LOL!

      Thank you for your kind comments. There is a lot more to the story, this was just a small snippet taken from somewhere near the middle, but I am glad you enjoyed it.

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    2. Any writer who claims NOT to have one or more characters based at least partly on themselves is either lying or writing technical manuals. ;o)

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    3. LOL! I definitely share your opinion.

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  17. Jessica Hale(Parsons)25 June 2014 at 18:37

    oh wow very interesting

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  18. What a wonderful story. It had a bit of everything's romance, humor scify spanking and more. I hope there is more. Can't wait.

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    1. Thank you, Laurel! Very kind! You are quite right - it is a "swashbuckling" type of a tale and it certainly does have a bit of everything in it.

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  19. Rose Hunt-Wolf25 June 2014 at 22:28

    I am intrigued by this ship! Is Eriduh the only non-alien aboard? How'd she get there? So many questions. And luscious spanking too. Good job.

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    1. The Spaartahns have had space travel for over a thousand years and the Isandia is an amazing vessel that has many secrets. Yes, Jem (Eriduh, which means 'enchantress') is the only non-Spaartahn aboard. You will have to wait in order to find out how she got on board, I can't disclose everything. Suffice to say she had several adventures en route, and not all of them good. I am glad to have intrigued you, and thank you for your encouraging comments.

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  20. I just googled him! :) Awesome story Ami, great premise, great spanking (woohoo) and I look forward to reading more!!

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    1. Oh you didn't!!! Thank you very much, Natasha for your most encouraging comments.

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  21. Wow. Google. Gotta love it. :) It really can take you places. Great spanking scene!

    Hugs,

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    1. Giggling! Thank you very much, Erzabet.

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  22. Wow! Awesome snippet; although, my bottom is a bit sore for her. ;-) Can't wait to read more and find more about how she ended up on an alien ship!
    Great job!
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    1. Ah, thank you, Anna. I am happy that I have made you wonder. She is a strong-minded and feisty young woman. No wonder Breeheny crossed a galaxy to find her - or his heart did.... Hopefully if ever I get through editing it for the hundreth time it will be of interest to someone.

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  23. Ami, great story! Eriduh is quite a handful. I can't wait to find out what other mischief she will get in to. Don't know if you meant it this way, but I loved the analogy of being married to an alien. I think we all feel that way about our significant other at times!

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    1. Hi George - hope you are still on to beta read? Jem (Eriduh - which means 'enchantress') gets into trouble the whole time. But she also has a unique way of getting out of it....

      You sussed out my analogy then? I love writing as near to the truth as I dare. Somehow it makes it a little more realistic.

      Thank you so much for your kind comments.

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  24. I love the stars like clotted cream. Such a perfectly English description. You worked hard on this, and I am proud of you! Your love for sci fi and spanking are a great addition to this event, and we are lucky to have you. I can't wait until we see your first published book. :)

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    1. Ana, you are so kind it gives me a lump in my throat. I am finally beginning to gain a little confidence in my writing and it is all due to your persistence. Thank you.

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  25. I love an alien with a firm hand!!! Thanks for excerpt loved it! Kelly Adams VIP

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    1. Thank you, Kelly. I don't think anything can beat a firm hand myself.

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  26. Enjoyed the short glimpse of the story hope to see more soon in the future

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    1. Thank you very much, Sara. This has all given me the impetus I needed to apply myself to my writing.

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  27. Great story, thx for posting!

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    1. Thank you for your kind comment, Teresa.

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  28. How wonderful, Ami! I love the extra-novel writing. Her voice is so perfectly spunky :) VIP W Amb

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    1. Thank you very much, Joelle. I think maybe Jem (Eriduh) caught her sassiness from me.

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    1. Thank you, Michelle. I hope you won't be disappointed - it's a long novel!

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  30. What a wonderful story - as you always say to me, I want MORE.

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    1. Leigh, you have always been a very kind and encouraging friend. Thank you.

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  31. Interesting excerpt! Married to an alien...yes, that has advantages... thanks for sharing! W Kerry a vail @ gmail (dot) com

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    1. LOL! I can tell you that it is a very exciting life! Thank you for your comments.

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  32. me thinks that somebody thoroughly enjoys the sting of a good hard spanking.

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    1. Me thinks you are absolutely right! Thank you.

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  33. Oh, I just wanted to keep reading! Excited to read your first book!

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    1. What a lovely comment, SH. I am able to tell you that it is a long book with lots of "action". Before bed reading or holiday reading. Whichever you prefer. Thank you.

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  34. Why did it have to end there!?! It was getting so good! Now I am really anxious to read the book!
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    1. Bless you JTL. What a lovely comment. I can see I shall soon have a very hot keyboard as I shall have to work hard to finish the editing. Many thanks.

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  35. I enjoyed your story. I was shaking my head thinking now you're really going to be in trouble. They never listen to me though.

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    1. This was suppose to have my name. I don't know I'm new at this. Myra

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    2. Hi Myra. No problem - your comments are very kind. Thank you.

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  36. Very nice!! Oh, I think I'd be in trouble all the time for wanting to explore the ship and having long showers. :D

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    1. You know something? I think she IS in trouble all the time. Just you wait and see. Thank you.

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  37. When you started the story with 'my husband is a bona fide extraterrestrial. You can Google him if you don’t believe me.', you had me hooked!

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    1. Oh Riley - this comment has simply delighted me. It is always quite a worry wondering how to "grab" the attention of a reader who doesn't know you. Thank you very much.

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  38. Loved it!!!! MMMM sexy alien and spanking... LUCKY

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    1. Thank you very much, Ashley.

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  39. Loved it. Wonderful read, can't wait for more.

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    1. Thank you very much Dee Dee. I am glad you enjoyed it.

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  40. OUCH!!! I'd be howling in pain too! Would like to read more though.

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    1. Yes, even I can sympathise! Thank you for your kind comment.

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  41. Yowza, that's got to hurt. Poor Eriduh! Just her luck he found the leather belt as she decides to go on a little adventure.

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    1. Hi Pao, Believe me, some of the things she gets up to are quite hair-raising. No wonder Breeheny loses patience. LOL! Thank you for your comments.

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  42. I love DD stories especially when the heroine is lapse with her safety and the hero warms her butt for it. Thank you for the look into this book. I want to read the rest soon.

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    1. Yes, it's strange how these men have a 'thing' about safety isn't it? LOL. Thank you very much for your kind comments.

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  43. Ooh, I really want to finish this story now. Your a big tease. ;) Will definitely be reading this one.

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    1. Thank you Steph. It may take me a while at it's around 95K long. Until I met Ana I didn't realise how difficult editing could be. But I hope you will stick around to read it when it's finished.

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  44. Totally loving that this was an extra scene inspired by the hop! Nicely done.

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    1. Thank you, Louisa. I think I am going to have to work extra hard on the rest of the book now!

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  45. Great snippet. Eriduh is such a mischief maker. I can't wait to see what she gets herself into next.

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    1. LOL! She certainly is! Wonder who I based her on? You never can tell.... Thank you for your kind comments.

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  46. Great excerpt, can't wait to read the rest!

    ingen77@yahoo(dot)com

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    1. Thank you very much, Jennifer.

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  47. Thank you all for your encouraging comments - please make sure you visit all the other writers participating in this event. The stories are all brilliant and I feel very excited to be amongst such talent.

    Ami

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  48. Amazing! So few words and yet you made the characters so wonderfully real. And the scene-setting was so well done. Wonderful, Ami. I really enjoyed it.

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    1. Thank you very much for your kind comments. I did find it quite difficult to set the scene whilst knowing the 'bigger picture', but I am eager to learn how to improve. Any constructive criticism is always welcomed. I am so glad you enjoyed what you read.

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  49. Wonderful excerpt. I wish you would put more spanking into your book. It would definitely spice it up!
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    1. Thank you, Marybeth. It is something I will certainly have to consider. It would fit in well, as ALL the main male characters have strong personalities and are dominant. It's just getting the mix right. I am glad you enjoyed it.

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  50. Interesting excerpt. I'm looking forward to reading more of it. bngeee7(at)gmail(dot)com

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    1. Thank you for your kind comments, Eva.

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  51. Interesting excerpt; wonder what happens next

    bn100candg at hotmail dot com

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    1. Thank you, bn100. All I can say is that she gets deeper and deeper.

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  52. Fun and hot story, Ami! I sure love macho alien spankers. :)

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    1. Thank you, Sue. Yes, I have a real liking for 'aliens'. LOL! Especially alien spankers and especially this particular alien spanker.

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  53. I truly did like the story. I could feel the defiant need in the sub and the alpha need to protect her. She put her self in danger which put his whole world in danger and sought out to teach her to stop that.

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    1. Jem (Eriduh) is a bit of a minx. She is always so certain that she is right. Hmmmm... But without saying too much - it is Breeheny who has put "our" world in danger. Only you have to read to book to find out why! Thank you for your comments.

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  54. This is wonderful! You had me chuckling throughout. Talk about a women determined to deserve a good spanking! lol

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    1. Hi Maren! I am a "chuckly" sort of a writer. Glad you enjoyed my little snippet.

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