SCI SPANKS 2014
Sci Spanks 2014 is finally here! Please visit Governing Ana for the prize list, sign-up sheet, and free books.
You can win from a prize
pool valued at over $1,000, including a Kindle Fire or Nook HD donated by
Blushing Books!
Many authors will also offer a contest on their
individual blogs. Your comment on their blogs
automatically enters you in both the main contest and the individual contests!
How do you play?
1.Visit each blog between Wednesday, June 25th and
Sunday, June 29th to read the posted stories and excerpts.
Note:
Natasha Knight’s story takes place in a nonconsensual setting, meaning the
heroine has not consented to getting spanked. If you are offended or alarmed,
you may prefer not to read her story.
2. Leave a comment answering the story question on
each blog. You will receive one entry
per blog for the grand prize drawing.
You will also be automatically entered in that author’s individual
contest, if she has one.
3.If you have visited all of the blogs, visit Ana’s blog
to sign up for FIVE bonus entries to the grand prize.
4.Deadline is midnight EST (UTC -5) on June 29!!
5. If you successfully completed a previous
challenge (Love Spanks 2014, Spank or Treat 2013, Spankee Doodle 2013, Love
Spanks 2013, or Spank or Treat 2012), you may add “VIP” to your comments. You will earn THREE bonus entries toward the
grand prize. (Yes, we will be doing this
again. Yes, if you successfully complete
the Love Spanks 2014 challenge you can become a VIP for our next activity!)
6. If you are a writer of fiction (any kind), add “W”
to your comments to be entered in the special author prize drawings.
7. If you are Sci Spanks 2014 Ambassador, please add
“Amb” to your comments to receive your extra prize drawing.
8.Visit Governing Ana or any of the participating blogs on Wednesday, July 2nd to find out the lucky winners. Will it be you? We will also announce prizes on the Sci Spanks Facebook page.
Like these events? Want to support your favorite
scifi authors? Become a Sci Spanks Ambassador! In exchange for promoting this
event, you will receive one extra prize entry, AND you are still eligible to
participate and win prizes! To find out the details, send an email to
oliviastarke@ymail.com, with the subject line “Sci Spanks Ambassador.”
For more information, updates, and a list of
participating authors, please visit Anastasia Vitsky’s
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an invitation.
For my contribution to Ana’s event, I would like to offer a small taste from my Sci Fi novel, Heartsong, which is still being edited.
Although the novel itself contains very little in the way of spanking, I thought it would be fun to imagine what would happen to my heroine if the man in her life finally decided that her annoying behaviour required some attention.
I hope you enjoy reading it, but if you don’t, just blame Anastasia for inviting me along.
Thanks, Ana, for giving me this opportunity, and for being a good friend.
Excerpt from Heartsong - Book One Eriduh
I’m married to an alien.
My
husband, Breeheny, is a bona fide extraterrestrial. You can Google him if you
don’t believe me.
Not
only does he come with every spine-tingling attribute on a scale from 1 to 10,
such as extraordinary height teamed with mouth-watering physical advantages,
that cause my libido on occasion severe disbelief, but he is pretty hot in the
looks department as well.
As if
this isn’t enough to knock a girl sideways, he has a voice that sounds like
rich melted chocolate, and the sort of strong determination that makes you
realize he is a man used to taking charge and getting his own way at all times
and under all circumstances.
Therein
lies a problem.
Every
upside has its downside. Every positive has its negative.
Every
blatantly reckless and disobedient action on my part, has its consequence.
A
consequence that often seems to result in the aforesaid alien’s left hand doing
its utmost to turn the silky, pale and sensitive cheeks of my bottom into two
swollen and scarlet globes you could quite adequately warm your hands on, on a
cold winter’s day, or even fry an egg on if you happened to have lost your
frying pan.
This
means that as soon as my howls have died down to manageable decibels, and I
have ceased my anguished bunny-hops whilst trying desperately to rub away some
of the pain, I promise myself I will divorce him at the very earliest
opportunity, and in between breathless sobs and hiccups I do my best to inform
him of this intention. He, on the other hand, simply folds me in a quick hug,
kisses the top of my head, and smirks.
He is
the type of man who thinks nothing of laying down rules, stating that they must
be obeyed, yet who frequently omits to inform me of (a) the reason for the
rules, or (b) the consequences of ignoring them. If you have a man like mine,
then you have my full sympathy.
Nothing
annoys me more than a man like this. Especially as he is the type who never
hesitates to warm my bottom using not only his hand, but an eighteen inch
wooden ruler (yes, I know it is prehistoric, but believe me when I tell you it
does the job) each and every time I am guilty of usurping his authority in the
smallest of ways, such as going for an unauthorized stroll around his
spaceship, keeping his crew from carrying out their duties, or attempting to
borrow his flyer though I have been told categorically never to fly unaccompanied until he considers me to have gained
experience.
Not
surprisingly on one such recent and momentous occasion, and in order to rub
salt into my wounds, perhaps to emphasize the fact that he has an entirely
different take on the situation, he warned me that if he ever catches me joy-riding in his flyer again, he will ensure that
my bottom remains hot and blazing for a week, not just a day or two.
Let me
explain.
Breeheny
has an obsession with my safety. I, on the other hand, find this irritating and
inconvenient – I am a grown woman after all, and English.
Sadly
it is my blatant disregard for both safety and rules that has resulted in what
Breheny says is a written-off flyer,
barely off the production line, with brightwork so glossy and new it looked as
if it was still wet.
It is
this disregard that has caused him to drop an entire container of freshly
brewed latte and spit the remainder over half his Bridge and the officers on duty
there, has led to a spanking of truly epic proportions, and causes me yet again
to consider my propensity for divorce action.
**********
The
day starts off normally enough.
The
hairbrush comes down for what could possibly be the fifteenth time. Unfortunately
I am bawling my eyes out and can’t count even if you beg me to.
“You
have used a whole week’s supply of water in just ten minutes.”
Breheny’s
voice sounds about as pained as my rapidly reddening rear.
“We’ve
been over this again and again. Until we can be reliably assured of coming out
of a wormhole in the vicinity of a hydrogen based planet, and therefore having
access to fresh supplies, the rule is the same for you as for any other person
aboard this ship. You conserve water.”
Swat
Swat Swat
He
increases his tempo.
“Why
you have to be constantly reminded is a complete mystery to me.”
Swat
Swat Swat
“When
I come off the Bridge I expect to be able to have the same length of shower you
have the privilege of taking.”
Swat
Swat Swat
“I do
not find it remotely funny to cover myself all over with this smelly, feminine,
lavender, excuse for a cleansing bar you call soap, only to have the warning
buzzer go and the water to cease running.”
Swat
Swat Swat
“And
all because you either couldn’t be bothered to wait for me to share a shower,
or you decided to take a shower twice as long as anyone else.”
Swat
Swat Swat
He
throws down my hairbrush and sits me on his lap. I wince and cry louder, trying to shrug off
his arms as they persist in hugging me tight.
“So
can I remind you once again of the rules and ask you to remember – only five minutes, in future.”
His
head disappears in the direction of my bosoms. I feel myself pushed backwards
on the bed and his hand starts to play melodies on my most sensitive bits.
I stop
sniffling and moan instead. Did I happen to mention that Breeheny has a way of
insisting on my obedience that mixes pain with pleasure in the most convincing
way?
**********
Having
been on the Bridge for most of the night, it isn’t long before he is snoring.
I am
now wide awake, so I finish dressing and make my way to the Mess deck where I
consume a glass of Spaartahn pear
juice and a large deliciously spicy bread roll slathered with honey. I am due
to meet Morgane, Breheny’s younger brother and second in command, for a flying
lesson.
Although
my flying career to date has been somewhat erratic, and the results of my
endeavors unpredictable, I never miss an opportunity to take a flyer for a few
turns around the immediate area of space occupied by the Isandia.
This
time I am disappointed. Morgane is nowhere in sight. My spirits drop, but I
look around, see Breeheny’s flyer primed and ready to go at a moment’s notice,
and resolutely decide my first solo flight is imminent regardless of his stupid
rules.
I
clamber into the driving seat intent on fastening my helmet and ignoring the
fact that the deck seems peculiarly quiet for this time of day.
I
lower the canopy and rapidly run through the usual pre-flight checks.
Everything seems in order. I fire her up, lift and make my escape via the
force-field and the open doors. The stars appear like clotted cream across my
vision as I turn slightly, veering down and under the belly of the huge vessel.
I try to remember everything Morgane has told me.
Fortunately
the flyer is no more difficult to handle than driving a Jaguar XK8 and I play
happily like a child with a new toy, keeping well to the rear of the Isandia,
though I know Breeheny is dead to the world, or rather, universe.
Eventually,
feeling somewhat bored, I become more adventurous and turn away heading into,
for me at least, unchartered territory.
Big
mistake.
Massive.
I find
myself caught up in a cloud of rolling space debris that ranges from rock the
size of front doors, to pieces the size of whole houses, and one or two the
size of sky scrapers.
Panic-stricken
I complete a rapid U-turn whilst swerving madly in order to avoid a collision.
The debris appears thicker than I think and I feel on the smug side when I
finally manage to extricate myself, mostly in one piece, and come out a short
distance from the ship. My smugness is wiped off my face, when I look up in
horror, to see a line of grim-faced officers observing me through the viewing
port on the Bridge.
Breeheny,
who by this time has split his coffee, forces his way through them to stand
glaring at me with a grim Just you wait
until I get hold of you face. I try to turn and flee.
This
time my luck runs out. I narrowly miss a piece of rock seemingly the size of
Newfoundland, only to slam sideways into another piece the size of Canada.
Well, okay, that’s an exaggeration, but it feels like I’ve hit an oncoming
express train.
Dizzily
I bounce around for a bit, sirens blaring as the automatic safety mask on my
helmet glues itself to my face. The flyer spins and leaks oxygen like an old
bucket, and I think I may throw up at any minute. Fortunately I pass out before
the crew sent to extract the flyer
and return it to the flight deck, arrive.
**********
How
can a voice resembling chocolate develop a hard edge to it so quickly?
Four
days have passed and I am sufficiently recovered from my little escapade to, in
Breeheny’s words, suffer the consequences
of my misdemeanors.
I am
draped over his lap, my front half on the bed, chewing a pillow in order to try
to muffle my howls, my back half feeling and possibly looking like a roast on a
spit. He ignores the ruler and just uses his hand, but I fear that is about to
change.
I am
unceremoniously dumped on the floor still howling. Breeheny is undeterred. He
heaps pillows on the end of the bed, then picks me up and arranges me over
them, my glowing bottom uppermost. His arm feels like steel, as he holds me
firm, my left hand trapped beneath me.
I
notice a faint blur out of the corner of my eye, then the memory of all
previous spankings dwindles rapidly into insignificance. I try to lift up but
am securely held down. Breeheny swings a length of deep purple leather around a
foot long and two and a half inches wide across my unhappy cheeks.
“This
is P’tahrian F’leem leather. It’s what my father used to discipline Freer,
Morgane and I when we were boys. I only recently came across it amongst my possessions.
I must have kept it as a souvenir. I didn’t realize it would come in handy so
soon, but I think you’ll agree it’s extremely effective.”
He
moves to my sit spots.
I
scream. He keeps going.
“It’s
pointless having a discussion with someone who so consistently ignores what I
say. Didn’t you think it strange the flight deck was so quiet? Why did you
think I was able to leave the Bridge so early in order to take some down time?
“I had
hoped to share that time with you.”
The
purple strap moves down to scald the backs of my thighs. I kick and it curls
itself around the inside of my right thigh.
I
scream. He keeps going.
“Never
again will you violate a rule and place yourself in danger. Do you understand?”
The
strap continues to fall on its way back up, re-crossing the welts left when it
passed that way before.
I
scream. He keeps going.
I stop
fighting and sag against the covers, my legs falling apart.
He
lays one final crack across my bottom that falls across my lower lips, stinging
like hornets. I am crying too hard to react.
He
gathers me into his arms, my terrorized bottom resting on his knees, his hand
in my hair.
“Eriduh,
you are my heart” he tells me. “I cannot live without you.
Ooh Ami...this is awesome! Looking forward to the rest of the story...I know it is going to be every bit as awesome! :D Thank you Ana for pushing a bit. ;)
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Cat VIP AMB
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Thanks, Cat, glad you enjoyed it. Believe me, this is just a very tiny snippet I tweaked a bit - and Ana is always pushing me, LOL.
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My wooden spoon and I will get you in line!
DeleteWhat me? Butter wouldn't melt....
Delete(w) Great excerpt; thank you for sharing it - certainty grabbed my attention (and my rear a little sore)
ReplyDeleteGlad I reached you rear end, and thanks for dropping by to comment.
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Ami
Definitely a good premise! Can't wait to read the rest.
ReplyDeleteThanks Melody, although this was taken from somewhere in the middle, and there is a whole lot still to edit.
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*giggles* Swat them sit spots! I love it and I can't wait for it to be published so I can enjoy the rest of the story!!! Great job! Heather Fortman HAFortman@gmail.com "W"
ReplyDeleteThanks very much for your kind comments, Heather. I just need to finish my editing and then find someone who is interested. LOL!
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Now this is truly a spanker! And I want my own hot alien now. oliviastarke@ymail.com
ReplyDeleteHe certainly does know how to spank! LOL! Wait till she REALLY gets in trouble!
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Now this is truly a spanker! And I want my own hot alien now. oliviastarke@ymail.com
ReplyDeleteI really liked this story and am looking forward to the rest. How can I get an alien like that. They are always so sexy. Thanks. rameyer.nmb@gmail.com
ReplyDeleteYes, Breeheny is pretty sexy, but some of the other aliens in the book are the type you run from! LOL! Thank you.
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I'm glad Ana invited you. This was terrific. Gotta love these hot, dominant, wonderful aliens. Thanks so much for participating. You fit in with all these other great authors. laurah2727@yahoo.com
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Thank you, Laura, for your kind comments. Yes, he is a very dominant man but it was only when Ana twisted my arm and told me she expected me to submit a story that I realised he was a spanking expert. LOL!
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Lol! I googled him :) This is a great story, perfect way for me to start the hop. Thanks Ami! Thecoverartisan@gmail.com amb
ReplyDeleteI am really glad I made the start of your blog hop a pleasant experience. Thank you.
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Wow!! I loved the preview! Sounds like an amazing story!!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for participating!
My email is kristinelyon@live.com
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Thank you very much for your encouraging comments, Kristin. I have enjoyed participating.
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Ami, fantastic story, though I really feel for your heroine. Breeheny is a strict task master, though she clearly hasn't learned her lesson when she disobeys him again within minutes of her last chastisement. I guess he needs to be strict to make a point. Loved the excerpt and look forward to reading the story when it is released.
ReplyDeleteKathryn, I can tell you she leads him a dance - you don't know the half of it. What with her running circles around him, a second dominant hero competing for her affections, battles galore, and a menacing and bloodthirsty saurian race thrown in for good measure, it won't be an EASY dance either! Thank you for your kind comments.
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That's some serious spanking. Like Kathryn, I felt for the heroine, but I also found myself totally irritated with her for overusing rationed water as if she were more deserving of it than the rest of the ship. Between that and the flyer, I kind of wanted to spank her myself... :)
ReplyDeleteI am very pleased you found her irritating, Anne. She certainly can be - irritating and annoying. Go ahead and spank her - you are welcome! Thank you for your comments.
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Thanks for the preview. Good inclusion in the collection.
ReplyDeleteTrina0326@yahoo.com
Thank you for your comments, Catrina.
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Definitely agree she deserves it!
ReplyDeleteYes, she does mostly. But you will need to read the whole thing. Thank you very much for stopping by.
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To paraphrase the Bard - Methinks the lady doth protest too much. Since she obviously knows the rules and the consequences, but continues to break the rules anyway, maybe she enjoys being spanked more than she wants to admit. Even to herself.
ReplyDeleteGood start, looking forward to the rest.
nakohese@gmail.com W
Ah - she doesn't seem to 'get it' re the rules, which is why she is ALWAYS in trouble. I have to admit to you that much of her character is based on mine! Sigh! As for enjoying being spanked - I admit to that as well! LOL!
DeleteThank you for your kind comments. There is a lot more to the story, this was just a small snippet taken from somewhere near the middle, but I am glad you enjoyed it.
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Any writer who claims NOT to have one or more characters based at least partly on themselves is either lying or writing technical manuals. ;o)
DeleteLOL! I definitely share your opinion.
Deleteoh wow very interesting
ReplyDeletejessicaoz(at)hotmail(dot)com
Thanks for stopping by, Jessica.
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What a wonderful story. It had a bit of everything's romance, humor scify spanking and more. I hope there is more. Can't wait.
ReplyDeletelaurellasky@gmail.com
Thank you, Laurel! Very kind! You are quite right - it is a "swashbuckling" type of a tale and it certainly does have a bit of everything in it.
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I am intrigued by this ship! Is Eriduh the only non-alien aboard? How'd she get there? So many questions. And luscious spanking too. Good job.
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The Spaartahns have had space travel for over a thousand years and the Isandia is an amazing vessel that has many secrets. Yes, Jem (Eriduh, which means 'enchantress') is the only non-Spaartahn aboard. You will have to wait in order to find out how she got on board, I can't disclose everything. Suffice to say she had several adventures en route, and not all of them good. I am glad to have intrigued you, and thank you for your encouraging comments.
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I just googled him! :) Awesome story Ami, great premise, great spanking (woohoo) and I look forward to reading more!!
ReplyDeleteOh you didn't!!! Thank you very much, Natasha for your most encouraging comments.
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Ami
Wow. Google. Gotta love it. :) It really can take you places. Great spanking scene!
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Author
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Giggling! Thank you very much, Erzabet.
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Ami
Wow! Awesome snippet; although, my bottom is a bit sore for her. ;-) Can't wait to read more and find more about how she ended up on an alien ship!
ReplyDeleteGreat job!
Anna
W Amb annajones389@gmail.com
Ah, thank you, Anna. I am happy that I have made you wonder. She is a strong-minded and feisty young woman. No wonder Breeheny crossed a galaxy to find her - or his heart did.... Hopefully if ever I get through editing it for the hundreth time it will be of interest to someone.
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Ami, great story! Eriduh is quite a handful. I can't wait to find out what other mischief she will get in to. Don't know if you meant it this way, but I loved the analogy of being married to an alien. I think we all feel that way about our significant other at times!
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Hi George - hope you are still on to beta read? Jem (Eriduh - which means 'enchantress') gets into trouble the whole time. But she also has a unique way of getting out of it....
DeleteYou sussed out my analogy then? I love writing as near to the truth as I dare. Somehow it makes it a little more realistic.
Thank you so much for your kind comments.
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Hi Ameliah, thanks for dropping by and giving me a good comment.
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I love the stars like clotted cream. Such a perfectly English description. You worked hard on this, and I am proud of you! Your love for sci fi and spanking are a great addition to this event, and we are lucky to have you. I can't wait until we see your first published book. :)
ReplyDeleteAna, you are so kind it gives me a lump in my throat. I am finally beginning to gain a little confidence in my writing and it is all due to your persistence. Thank you.
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I love an alien with a firm hand!!! Thanks for excerpt loved it! Kelly Adams VIP
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kelly. I don't think anything can beat a firm hand myself.
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Enjoyed the short glimpse of the story hope to see more soon in the future
ReplyDeleteThank you very much, Sara. This has all given me the impetus I needed to apply myself to my writing.
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Great story, thx for posting!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind comment, Teresa.
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How wonderful, Ami! I love the extra-novel writing. Her voice is so perfectly spunky :) VIP W Amb
ReplyDeleteThank you very much, Joelle. I think maybe Jem (Eriduh) caught her sassiness from me.
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Can't wait for more
ReplyDeleteThank you, Michelle. I hope you won't be disappointed - it's a long novel!
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What a wonderful story - as you always say to me, I want MORE.
ReplyDeleteLeigh, you have always been a very kind and encouraging friend. Thank you.
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Interesting excerpt! Married to an alien...yes, that has advantages... thanks for sharing! W Kerry a vail @ gmail (dot) com
ReplyDeleteLOL! I can tell you that it is a very exciting life! Thank you for your comments.
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me thinks that somebody thoroughly enjoys the sting of a good hard spanking.
ReplyDeleteMe thinks you are absolutely right! Thank you.
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Oh, I just wanted to keep reading! Excited to read your first book!
ReplyDeleteSH VIP shavro6@gmail.com
What a lovely comment, SH. I am able to tell you that it is a long book with lots of "action". Before bed reading or holiday reading. Whichever you prefer. Thank you.
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Why did it have to end there!?! It was getting so good! Now I am really anxious to read the book!
ReplyDeleteSnowy090@aol.com
Bless you JTL. What a lovely comment. I can see I shall soon have a very hot keyboard as I shall have to work hard to finish the editing. Many thanks.
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I enjoyed your story. I was shaking my head thinking now you're really going to be in trouble. They never listen to me though.
ReplyDeleteThis was suppose to have my name. I don't know I'm new at this. Myra
DeleteHi Myra. No problem - your comments are very kind. Thank you.
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Very nice!! Oh, I think I'd be in trouble all the time for wanting to explore the ship and having long showers. :D
ReplyDeleteJessica E. Subject VIP W
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You know something? I think she IS in trouble all the time. Just you wait and see. Thank you.
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When you started the story with 'my husband is a bona fide extraterrestrial. You can Google him if you don’t believe me.', you had me hooked!
ReplyDeleteOh Riley - this comment has simply delighted me. It is always quite a worry wondering how to "grab" the attention of a reader who doesn't know you. Thank you very much.
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Loved it!!!! MMMM sexy alien and spanking... LUCKY
ReplyDeleteThank you very much, Ashley.
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Loved it. Wonderful read, can't wait for more.
ReplyDeleteDee Dee
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Thank you very much Dee Dee. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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OUCH!!! I'd be howling in pain too! Would like to read more though.
ReplyDeleteAmb
Yes, even I can sympathise! Thank you for your kind comment.
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Yowza, that's got to hurt. Poor Eriduh! Just her luck he found the leather belt as she decides to go on a little adventure.
ReplyDeleteHi Pao, Believe me, some of the things she gets up to are quite hair-raising. No wonder Breeheny loses patience. LOL! Thank you for your comments.
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I love DD stories especially when the heroine is lapse with her safety and the hero warms her butt for it. Thank you for the look into this book. I want to read the rest soon.
ReplyDeleteYes, it's strange how these men have a 'thing' about safety isn't it? LOL. Thank you very much for your kind comments.
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Ooh, I really want to finish this story now. Your a big tease. ;) Will definitely be reading this one.
ReplyDeletefsteph55(at)yahoo(dot)com
Thank you Steph. It may take me a while at it's around 95K long. Until I met Ana I didn't realise how difficult editing could be. But I hope you will stick around to read it when it's finished.
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Totally loving that this was an extra scene inspired by the hop! Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Louisa. I think I am going to have to work extra hard on the rest of the book now!
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Great snippet. Eriduh is such a mischief maker. I can't wait to see what she gets herself into next.
ReplyDeleteKaGe
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LOL! She certainly is! Wonder who I based her on? You never can tell.... Thank you for your kind comments.
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Great excerpt, can't wait to read the rest!
ReplyDeleteingen77@yahoo(dot)com
Thank you very much, Jennifer.
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Thank you all for your encouraging comments - please make sure you visit all the other writers participating in this event. The stories are all brilliant and I feel very excited to be amongst such talent.
ReplyDeleteAmi
Amazing! So few words and yet you made the characters so wonderfully real. And the scene-setting was so well done. Wonderful, Ami. I really enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much for your kind comments. I did find it quite difficult to set the scene whilst knowing the 'bigger picture', but I am eager to learn how to improve. Any constructive criticism is always welcomed. I am so glad you enjoyed what you read.
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Wonderful excerpt. I wish you would put more spanking into your book. It would definitely spice it up!
ReplyDeletemrenn@nycap.rr.com
Thank you, Marybeth. It is something I will certainly have to consider. It would fit in well, as ALL the main male characters have strong personalities and are dominant. It's just getting the mix right. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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Interesting excerpt. I'm looking forward to reading more of it. bngeee7(at)gmail(dot)com
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind comments, Eva.
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Interesting excerpt; wonder what happens next
ReplyDeletebn100candg at hotmail dot com
Thank you, bn100. All I can say is that she gets deeper and deeper.
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Fun and hot story, Ami! I sure love macho alien spankers. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sue. Yes, I have a real liking for 'aliens'. LOL! Especially alien spankers and especially this particular alien spanker.
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I truly did like the story. I could feel the defiant need in the sub and the alpha need to protect her. She put her self in danger which put his whole world in danger and sought out to teach her to stop that.
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Jem (Eriduh) is a bit of a minx. She is always so certain that she is right. Hmmmm... But without saying too much - it is Breeheny who has put "our" world in danger. Only you have to read to book to find out why! Thank you for your comments.
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This is wonderful! You had me chuckling throughout. Talk about a women determined to deserve a good spanking! lol
ReplyDeleteHi Maren! I am a "chuckly" sort of a writer. Glad you enjoyed my little snippet.
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